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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story? with
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Sounds fine to me. It isn't too verbose, so your readers should be able to retain most of it without you having to repeat it later. -
Eldoria reacted to VM_Belwynd's post in the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story? with Like.
So in this situation, my deuteragonist, is trying to explain the bond to the protagonist. He has been transported to the world, has no...
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"Does your character have the same eye color as you? Bad author! Your character can't have the same eye color as 80% of the planet."
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I agree, I think some of the questions are more about 'self insert' than mary sue.
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Correct. We use the term "Mary Sue" in honor of the Star Trek fanfiction character that brought the trope to light. Before that...
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These quizzes ask the dumbest questions.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is your character a mary sue?.I suspect the quiz maker created naive and careless operational questions, he couldn't distinguish what the essence of the Marry Sue...
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Extremely so, out of the many unpublished stories I've trashed. I grabbed one of my earlier pieces of garbage where my MC was definitely...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is your character a mary sue?.Agree. Other questions are also biased, such as those regarding FMC's royalty background and special power. The problem is, royalty...
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:blob_uwu: I knew that you'd be the first or atleast one of the first few to reply to that poll.
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Whoever made this biased test doesn't even know what a Mary Sue is. Lots of the questions are wasted trying to determine if the...
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Eldoria replied to the thread What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?.Well, if my FMC hadn't pursued the last tyrant of the Rose kingdom in the ancient ruins, then the world wouldn't have experienced a...
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Eldoria reacted to Conqueror_Quack's post in the thread What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline? with Like.
What's the smallest thing in your story that, if removed or altered, could change your novel's entire plot? Will the entire world in...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is your character a mary sue?.Kira (Yagami Light) is a god complex who judges the world as he pleases. My FMC only judges the systemic sinners (tyrants) and unable to...
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Ran the test for Lucius, one of the protagonists of The Elarian Chronicles: Duskfall, but the test was fun. I'm pretty sure the...