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You give good foodbacks. Er, feedbacks. :blob_aww: -
@Eldoria @Fairemont Thank you for spending your time on my work ?.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers?.Dude... please listen his explanation @L1aei :
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Eldoria reacted to c37's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with
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I understand your advice now. Scene 2 feels much better and easier to read. -
Eldoria reacted to Assurbanipal_II's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Like.
Come on, just look at the pose in the cover, and the tags. :meowsip: Love is the emotional aspect of a relationship. It is complex...
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Eldoria reacted to Assurbanipal_II's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Haha.
:meowsip: Lust sells like sliced bread on SH. Has nothing to do with love.
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I agree with most of what @Eldoria has to say. You can cut that description down quite a bit. For example: A draconic berserker, whose...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Need feedback on my revised chapter 1..Yes, more or less like that. Insert descriptions within the actions. But don't overdo it; just include one or two character traits per...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Need feedback on my revised chapter 1..Well, there are many things I want to convey, but I only choose to focus on one thing, "narrative technique." Consider the following...
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This chapter one makes a second critique that I've got on my plate to try and get typed up tonight. I could also see a lot of what El...
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Haven't read any of the story yet, but do want to point out a few things real quick before I start. This: Isn't really doing you, or...
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GSC? Oh, yeah! Watched and even translated! I really love that one! Btw ep. 6 & 7 are out now I wouldn´t say it´s cruel. It´s just...