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If I didn’t have enough faith in the writer’s ability to tell a story to read the part they put at the beginning I wouldn’t read their...

A serious answer of when to use prologues: If the first chapter cannot serve as a hook, if the first chapter doesn't do a good job of...

The problem with prologues is that most people don't know what it actually is. They think the prologue and the synopsis is the same...

Your fight scenes are pretty solid. I add a few notes regarding pacing to increase the tension of the story. The pacing slows down...

thank you so much for your feedback on my stories I thought of, edit, and try to write as much as I can. I got plenty of stories to work...

Honestly, this is something you’ll only truly understand once you try writing it. You can plan as much as you want, but until you...

w what do you think the first chapter after the prologue should be realistically for Ben? I need all of the feedback and advise I can...

do you think I got a chance for this story to get noticed in due time? what do you think of Ben so far? I hope you like him and I got a...

For someone to drop a bomb on you, they don't require having to identify themselves as a reader. So if that account had read fifteen of...

Hello, guys. I'm not sure where to post this, but am feeling a little desperate and lost here, so please bear with me. Today, I saw a...

Book Two of the Eldoria Chronicles is now live! ...

This won't work. For 99% internet users, all it takes to evade an IP ban is to... restart their router, so their ISP can assign them a...

I would say comedy can be boiled down to: 1. Twisting expectations. This is like the character dodging an attack by falling down...

My main motivation to start writing was from an anime adapted from LN...

I may not have a good reference for you. Cinematic action narratives adopt the writing style of action films. You can study how a...