Recent content by DWS

I wrote a GB story and the response was great. Over 440 readers by the time I finished it. Of course, there's a lot of variance in what kinds of story you'll find in the tag. Some just have it as an add-on to an isekai concept; I didn't do that personally. Just make it as good as you can and...

You don't mind if I disect things a little do you? Let's start from the... start, because a good first chapter is important. Call it personal preference - but I have two problems with this opening paragraph. One, it's a rather clumsy way of introducing a character. The paragraph does not...