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Do you use em dash?
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I never used to. Ironically, I've started using them ever since people started talking about seeing them as AI editing. I didn't even...
Mar 29, 2026
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[Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art?
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The Saibaman thing is so unfair to my boy Yamcha. He steps up to fight before Krillin because he feels suspicious. He literally saved...
Mar 28, 2026
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How do you write action scenes?
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I'm a very visual person, so I don't know if this will work for you the way it does for me. I tend to imagine the action scene in my...
Mar 28, 2026
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How do you write action scenes?
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I'm personally a big fan of the "Hobbit" school of action scenes, where they happen entirely off screen, to other people, except where...
Mar 28, 2026
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What makes a Good Power System
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I think a great example of a complex power system is Star Wars. Each Jedi's style, personality, and connection to the Force result in a...
Mar 6, 2026
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Military Run Empire
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There are plenty of military juntas and dictatorships that you can look at for inspiration, but it can be easy to write a paper-thin...
Mar 4, 2026
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You can start by reading Prussia's history. It's one of the best examples of an "army with a kingdom."
Mar 4, 2026
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Good or Mad? My plot idea.
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My two cents is that I would deepen the characters in order to avoid more ordinary "misunderstanding-type plots" that readers can find...
Mar 4, 2026
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Same as above. You should still write it if you feel it resonates with you that much, but it's not excessively dark or, as you put it...
Mar 4, 2026
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Opinion on selfish MCs.
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I think that they can be extremely relatable to a fault. At some point your character needs to be at least somewhat, a little bit...
Mar 4, 2026
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Real-Life Horrors
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All I do is just describe my actual anxiety into words. Just think about how you would feel if some criminal was targeting you, or a...
Mar 4, 2026
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Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better?
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Personally I wouldn't risk changing the work very much based on comments. If you think of your story like a moving vehicle, then a...
Feb 27, 2026
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Writing trash for fun
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There's an interesting phenomena that can occur when writing "trash". Because you're not putting restrictions or expectations on...
Feb 27, 2026
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What's up with the downvoting?
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The internet is already a fast-paced, impatient environment in the first place. Mix that with the fact that a lot of people lack media...
Feb 27, 2026
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Can a slow-burn military fantasy survive without an OP protagonist?
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I generally don't enjoy OP protagonist stories. That can work fine in a slow, military story because in order to build drama and draw...
Feb 26, 2026
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