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I don't know

I'd always wanted to write a book. Then one day, I sat my ass down and wrote.

Why choose? Why not all of them? I see no reason why sword,magic gender bending mmo have to be mutually exclusive

Thinking back, the most valuable feedback I've ever gotten was the same feedback that I basically rejected because I thought it was...

I don't know about your setting, but an 18 y/o teacher? In the US you have to have at least a four-year degree, so you would likely be...

This is his only appearance in the whole story.

Hahaha! For my current stretch, my MC was just recently promoted to Captain, but he doesn't have a team except for three guys. He...

Here you go: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/967246/a-place-to-bloom/

This is the opening scene of chapter 1, so it has to be pristine. I thought maybe if I trim the fat... but am I losing anything...

I couldn't finish the first chapter, sorry. First, the prose reads as a rough draft. There's poor comma usage, word repetition, and...

"Think!" He cried. "Eva! It's me, don't you recognize me? Your special 'Dolphy-Doo-Doo'? "What?" She screeched. "Impossible!" Then...

I heard that some time after he was rejected from art school, he committed suicide.

I write. I think you mean to ask what I do in my up time? I write while pretending to work.

How's this: I slammed my hand flat against Bazen’s chest, grasping the arrow shaft between my thumb and the rest of my hand. He heaved...