Recent content by Dhael_Ligerkeys

I'm getting a lot of readers, but they all seem really quiet. I've left author's notes asking for feedback but they all fall on deaf ears.

That's be great. Thank you.

Damn, those are some real stakes and not many authors are brave enough to use them. Well done! Imposing real consequences on the characters really makes a story feel worthwhile. Yeah, not all obstacles have to be Mount Everest for there to be meaning. And it's not all about what the characters...

Thank you very much for your feedback, Mr Big Cat. It's much appreciated. Yeah, it does slow down a bit after the first chapter. Don't think I have much of a choice there, maybe with a bit of clean up it might improve a bit. Don't suppose you could give a couple of examples of the droning on...

Well, I don't know long you've working at it, but the consensus is, if about 5% of views make a comment that's already very high. Just keep writing. You'll get there eventually.

Misunderstandings between family are rough. Having the courage to address them, especially when one is meant to have authority over you? Not many relationships survive that. How did you manage to show that resolve?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA I'm so sorry my MC is so under-accomplished. Please forgive me. But wow! I don't really have words.

Failing isn't a the worst thing you can do. Not trying is. Failing is just a stepping stone. Like the wise Thomas Wayne once said, "Why do we fall? So we can get back up again.” You had the courage to write it and, better yet, submit it to peer review. Kudos to you. Now, get back on the horse...

Fight scenes can be hard for some. Each of us seem to be better portraying one specific element of story telling and struggling with others. You did fine work there, well done. You're very good at describing the scenes and portraying the despair. Well done. Now, I don't know if putting it...

In your story, what's something you're particularly proud of? Maybe it was an epiphany that made a set of rules or a power work. Maybe a particular good bit of writing. Maybe it's making a cliché great again. Or maybe it's addressing an elephant in the room that most would just ignore and hope...

Can your swarm read as well, my Lady? Here's mine. Feel free to be brutally honest and I'm happy for you to make the review as public as you'd like. Even better if you could put it on the books page in the Hub of Scribbles - if that's not pushing your magnanimous kindness.

You're a brave little cat. Here's mine, only 7 chapter out right now. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/971239/the-weaver--a-dark-litrpg-fantasy/

I think we all eventually come to realise that writing is a job. We think we chose it, but later find out it chose us. It entices us with fun scenes in our head and we just spend ages revisiting. And we spend some time day-dreaming, jumping from cool scene to cool scene, maybe figuring out how...

No, I've seen some from other places, not just RR.

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