Recent content by DevPain

Ream me, folks. Not getting the kind of traction I'd hoped for and I need to know what it is that I need to change about the story. It is a slow-burn so maybe that's why is what I figure but an outside opinion still helps. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1442997/earth-conqueror-green/

This is some honest work you're doing here, so don't mind me throwing my lot in as well. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/260242/sanguine-sovereign/

Started writing my first ever novel a while ago and I'm up to 10 chapters so far so an honest critique of how I've managed up till now would be appreciated. My writing experience prior to this basically consists of writing a chapter of two of whatever plot-bunny pops into my mind and then...

Hohoho. Alas, I am but a humble writer for the foreseeable future. We all gotta start somewhere. Mine was vandalizing the walls of my house as a child. Don't take commissions atm so nah. The second, maybe a bit :sneaky: Thanks.

And I did. Might have been better served commissioning someone but broke people gotta do what broke people gotta do.