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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Please help this poor soul get enough attention. Any reviews will greatly help me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/868235/the-knight-who-was-too-angry-to-die-shinu-hodo-okotsu-ta-kishi/
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Ok. I'm ready for you to make me cry. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/868235/the-knight-who-was-too-angry-to-die-shinu-hodo-okotsu-ta-kishi/
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    Discuss: Eastern Asia culture

    My bad. I should have written the word "them". Caprice?
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    What is a good starting word count for beginners

    Between 1000-2000. But it depends on your target audience. If your target audience are teenagers, go for 3000. They have better attention span compared to adults. I'm speaking this in my own experience. I work in office and it's so frustrating that some adults don't even read what is written...
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    Discuss: Eastern Asia culture

    You just reminded me Apple factories in China that forces their employees to work 12-hours a day, six days a week, which kinda sucks. I feel bad to modern Chinese people...
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    How Do You Write A ‘Normal’ Story?

    Sounds like a hurdle that needs to be overcome! I was on the same shoes like you when I started writing back in my high school days and guess what, I used to write fictions that were totally ingrained to daily struggle as a student to what I am writing now, historical fantasy fiction. For me...
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    My Experience Writing Sci-fi

    It's called getting so invested on your own fiction. I see that you're downplaying your rich imaginations. You have to remember too that those spaceships you're thinking of were also imagined by people going through the same situation like yours when they wrote/created those machines. Aren't...
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    Need some prequel examples

    If I were you I would write them on two separate paper and read them aloud. Whatever my neighbor find cooler is the one I will make for the prequel. Joking aside, why not try to probe first the implications that was still not resolved from your previous story? Normally a sequel is a...
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    Discuss: Eastern Asia culture

    Where in SEA are you from? I want to know because I mainly write Eastern stories so I might write your country's story in the near future. Yes. No such thing as ancient China, but people generally simplyfy Tang, Han, Qin China as ancient China. Cmiiw Sucks that Qin disintegrated. I'm from...
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    Discuss: Eastern Asia culture

    As the title says, let's discuss East Asian culture. We are all aware, at least, ancient China helped forged countries like Korea and Japan to what they are now. From their culture and alphabets, to food and art. If you turn a page in their history, ancient China pretty much influenced...
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    I'm losing energy to write

    Happens to all of us. Take a week break then return to writing. Just don't be like me that I took almost a year to continue my story I put on hiatus. God speed to you anon.
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