Recent content by DeepWater

It would be interesting, but I'm sure most people would be disappointed.

You need a better synopsis so people will read it.

Wrong, the biggest problem is that his first chapter only has 38 reads. Absolutely pathetic. It needs a better title/cover/summery so people actually read the thing. Quality matters very little on SH as long as it isn't heinously bad.

I like the style.

We love Timmy. That man is a hero who personally saved my life when our Pelican went down in blood gultch Iraq.

Id probably plan to finish releasing whenever you finish your next book. So if you think it will take a year, release 4 a week, then you can transition your audience right into your new novel.

Some people will treat you like the devil if you use AI for illustrations. It's just the hill they've chosen to die on.

Honestly, I feel like this misses the point of how to make your writing better. Who cares that she ate some bread or that is was good? This is fluff. If you actually want to make your story better, then add something of actual substance.

Release it as soon as Christmas break starts

It happens all the time. Major Internet outages have been happening every month or two for years. Maybe even more often, just with smaller sections of the internet.

We are so back.

It's mine. All mine.

Have an anime style power limiter

Results were mixed, but definitely worth the price. It's pretty cheap as far as advertising goes. If you're selling your novel on Amazon you'll probably make your money back and then some.

Based on the fact that you aren't getting any views at all, people aren't even giving your book a chance. You need a better cover and synopsis to draw people in. You might even want to change your title.