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    Review Swap for a Near Future Science Fantasy (Ongoing 17k words)

    Thanks so much for agreeing to read and happy to return the favor! And no worries about that, I'd love some feedback from someone who's not already into that subgenre of political scifi/fantasy! I'll start reading right away \.
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    Review Swap for a Near Future Science Fantasy (Ongoing 17k words)

    Hey y'all! I'm getting back into posting chapters of my near future setting science fantasy, By Any Magical Means Necessary. It's a novel about an archivist who gets caught up in a rebellion against the government after the use of a magic-like weapon during a terrorist attack. I'm happy to...
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    Minaris' Free First-Chapter Review/Feedback Thread

    Thank you so much for the review/commentary on the story. I'm glad that alot of my characterizations and such hit the way they should have. Your comments about elevating the evilness of the fascist regime are super interesting because I explicitly toned down the villainy to make it more...
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    I will review your first chapter

    It's a near future science fantasy story. Appreciate the read! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/660649-by-any-magical-means-necessary/chapter/660669/
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    Minaris' Free First-Chapter Review/Feedback Thread

    Hello there and thank you for being willing to provide feedback on folks' stories. Here's mines, By Any Magical Means Necessary. It's a near future science fantasy. I would love feedback around the plotting, keeping your interest, and fiction-believability since it's a "real world" story. By...
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