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thanks fo your comments

I’ve been working on my isekai story Trapped in Another Stupid World, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback from fellow writers and readers here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1425698/trapped-in-yet-another-stupid-world/

I’ve been working on a long-form story called Second Divine War. It’s a mix of urbanfantasy and fantasy war, thanks https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1684289/the-second-divine-war/

Genre: Fantasy URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1425698/trapped-in-yet-another-stupid-world/ Feedback level: 1 Other: Maybe the first chapter could be boring. I pass the rules so, take it and be honest

Hey, Thanks for your opinion, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying it. And yeah, I had already noticed some of those issues. I wanted to restructure the story after finishing chapter 12 to make it better, but first, I needed an honest opinion, lol. My friends aren’t usually very...

Hey everyone, I’m looking for some brutally honest feedback on my story, Trapped in Yet Another Stupid World. I want to improve, and I know that means hearing the good, the bad, and the ugly. you can be honestly, i need to improve...

Alright, I need a harsh critique if I want to know if I'm doing well. ROAST MINE https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1425698/trapped-in-yet-another-stupid-world/