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cxHeavenlyDemonxD replied to the thread Would you keep reading past Chapter 1? Why or why not?.True I am seeing that as I write more chapters as the narrative becomes more vivid and my MCs enters the wider world each chapter fuels... -
cxHeavenlyDemonxD reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Would you keep reading past Chapter 1? Why or why not? with
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It's not about how thick your pages are, but how much your narrative is sufficient to convey a story worth reading... at least... -
cxHeavenlyDemonxD reacted to LuciferVermillion's post in the thread Would you keep reading past Chapter 1? Why or why not? with Like.
Curious to ask, more is how many?
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cxHeavenlyDemonxD reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Would you keep reading past Chapter 1? Why or why not? with Like.
No, the chapter is too short, and doesn't provide a hook. Write more chapters before asking for feedback again.
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cxHeavenlyDemonxD posted the thread Would you keep reading past Chapter 1? Why or why not? in Story Feedback.https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/145093/the-twin-swordmasters (Novel Links) The Twin Swordmasters | Scribble Hub Title: The Twin...
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cxHeavenlyDemonxD updated their status.This is my first time attempting to write a light novel I am looking for some honest feedback some tips suggestions to become a better...
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cxHeavenlyDemonxD replied to the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless.The Twin Swordmasters | Scribble Hub My very first time writing a light novel I uploaded a prologue and 1st chapter don't hold back tell...
