Recent content by CrownedTraitor

I suggest you to be more proactive next time in taking advice because there are genuine people here who want to help yet you don't give them a response. Doing this again will result in you having a bad reputation.

I am waiting for a reply

because of "our" and "us" being mentioned already, repeating it thrice in one sentence might not be a good idea. them referring to the fingers is quite strange, so I suggest just defining the fingers as a group of objects hence replacing it with "all over". Well this one needs some changes...