Recent content by CosmicWonder

While the premise and emotional core are strong, a few refinements could elevate the story's impact further: Clarity and Pacing (Part One): Protagonist Focus: Initial protagonist focus could be sharpened to quickly ground the reader. Hook: The initial confrontation, while establishing...

The idea, at least initially, is for the superpowers to play a supporting role, not be the star of the show. For now, the interpersonal struggles are the main focus. I had a similar feeling about simplifying certain sections, and it was for the very reason you just pointed out. I know I...

I started writing not long ago and I appreciate any kind of feedback. The story itself is an idea I've had for a year now, but I recently pushed myself to put it into words. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1582498/reality-shift-protocol/

This is my first attempt, I have no clue how people will receive it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1582498/reality-shift-protocol/