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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with
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Somehow reminds me of a story I started reading but never got back to on Royal Road - in a world where professional dungeon explorers... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I wouldn’t say doing everything you can to get back to your sister is a strong hook, or a hook at all. It does, however, establish your...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Lysander_Works's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I'm gonna take a second crack it it here before nodding off to bed. Waking to a world unfamiliar, in a world far too different from my...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
The clarity is good. The hooks? not so much. Like the posts before me said, need more punchier. Similar premises like others? yes, but...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Puffikki's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I would suggest, shorten it. Make it a bit punchier. Possibly split it into three paragraphs. Also, first sentence seems weak. Hit me...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Lysander_Works's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Got a new story soon to launch, but I skipped the synopsis all the way to now, and now I really don't know how it's supposed to feel...
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Hey all, I'm Queerious, and I recently joined up to write - I was most recently writing on the SCP wiki, if any of y'all are familiar...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread I dont like the last arc i write (16 chapters) with Like.
Do i want to change it? nope, too tired for that Delete it? no way I just feel that since i already waste my time writing it, i want my...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3).Thank you very much for the encouraging advice, Bim! ❤️
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3) with Like.
Okay, next is... Miss Cookiez is it? 1. Storywise: Okay i'm going to start with story first this time. Because here's the thing. After...
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This is all the reasoning you need to keep it SFW. Writing things you'd rather not write will likely lead you to burnout. This site...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Go the smut route or not? with Like.
Do what you want or works properly for your story. I could never imagine myself somehow inserting sex scenes in my diary formatted...
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Write such things only if you want to. Do not force it in just for exposure. There are plenty of stories that are popular without...
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Are you writing for escapism or for readers reactions or smoothness of story, you just mentioned different writing priorities. Because...