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Your a cool guy, Mike.

Finished the Chapter 1 critique, and sent it (via private conversation). There's a lot there to digest and the forum thread just isn't...

Just wanted to thank all my readers for checking out my Webnovels. You didn't have to give me a chance, but you did and I'm forever...

Is anyone interested in any Steampunk genre stories? I haven't seen any around here. Maybe I haven't looked hard enough, but it seems to...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2189063/hacking-the-system-kingdom-of-stone-litrpg/

I felt that this story skillfully transplants the Korean-origin dungeon genre format into 1979 American society, portraying the lives of...

Read the first chapter, and will try to type up the critique on it later tonight if I'm feeling up for it. Been doing a bit better today...

Shout-Out: Just wanted to thank the 15 readers for checking out my second LitRPG Webnovel! Your the best and you've helped me improve so...

In my opinion the line gets drawn the moment a character's flaw(s) becomes their entire identity. Completely overshadowing whatever good...

Thx ☮️

I agree with other respondents that a good synopsis should have a hook. Furthermore, a synopsis should make the reader care about your...

The synopsis, in my opinion, should have 3 things in it. It should give an idea of what the story is going to be about...

I’m not saying you need to include the entire plot in your synopsis. What I am saying is that it currently reads like random bullet...

So, I need to link Sage to the plot? Honestly, this story is still developing. But since Sage is also a MC I guess I should give her...

Yikes, get better Mike! ❤️