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all the damn time... was how I 'ruined' my first webnovel MFGR (IMO, others liked it but I can do better!) by not slowing it down...

I feel entirely the opposite. I could write endless fluff and stall for like a dozen chapters if I let myself. I'm usually dreading the...

A lot of times, yes. But slow burner chapters are like the 'necessary evil' of technical aspects of writing. A good story needs a...

I usually write from one point to the next, then go back and expand to slow it down if needed. I was really bad about having this BIG...

Do you ever feel like you just want to get to the next point in the story, but you HAVE to take things slow unless you risk ruining the...

Idk. Be happy I guess

I'm Hayley. As a seasoned editor with 16 years of experience in publishing, I'd love to offer my service as a hobby. I've worked with...

Well, thanks for commenting, from the name of the world, you are right, Avalon is from Athurian legend, a paradise world where the sword...

Okay first off you need to change the name of the world. Avalorn? Seriously? I tried to type it in and autocorrect automatically changed...

Okay, thanks for your guidance, man.

This thread should be placed in the feedback section so volunteer reviewers can easily find it, dude.

Both. lol. But it was Bowie when i write the first chapter.

Inspired by David Bowie or Nirvana?

Sup! Well, this is the first time I create a web novel, and to be honest i believe that still many mistakes and errors are present here...

As soon as I'm done writing, and sulking to myself, knowing all the while I should proof read, and edit, but instead choose to post as...