Thanks for the feedback!
My mistake on the pop culture stuff. I went overboard on those, I'll try to cut back on them more and remove some of the extra ones when I do some editing later. I'm already thinking I'll remove the Zombieland mention. I do however really like Rose's rant in chapter 2...
Hey all, I'm working on a zombie short story called Last Day on Earth. It's a romance, specifically a grumpy/sunshine. Or at least my attempt. It's the first bit of fiction I've written in over a decade, so I am desperate for some feedback since I'm incredibly rusty. I plan on going back and...