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I'd be interested to hear what you think! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/531419/fragments-from-the-wildlands/

Yeah, the mirror thing I felt I understand quite well, which is why I was a little surprised that it came up because she didn't note any of her features and just kind of fixed herself before entering. I felt it would be something that most people might do before an important meeting. (Not to...

Thanks for looking it over and the detailed response. I do have a question about it though, you felt smoothing the wrinkles on her dress was the whole taking stock of her character traits in the mirror? I could understand if we saw her tawny skin, and brown hair and eyes in that scene but that...

I am not trying to hijack the thread, but I can say that most mundane sounds the reader should already know. If you say a character vomited or they heard the sound of vomiting that should be enough for the reader to understand what sound they should imagine.

Just wanted to add, I finished updating my synopsis, using the feedback provided. Thank you for taking the time!

It’s funny, I kind of have the same bias for the genre as well. It is also hard for me to review them because of it. I don’t know what it is. Maybe it is the stats.

Thanks for that. I will dig into my blurb tonight. I think authors (at least me) are always too scared of giving too much away in their summary, but now that you mention it, I do suppose I should give away more than I did. Also thanks for catching those couple of typos that slipped through. I...

I'm game. Let's see what my first chapter does. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/531419/fragments-from-the-wildlands/

Hey, I wouldn't mind if you took a look at my story. I am pretty new here on SH, so I have no clue how things work here. My cover is a placeholder for now, so I know I am getting passed over because of that, but I would like to hear what you think otherwise...

The creator of NieR. It had a decent story with the standards JRPG trappings.. But it was fun enough.

This, this, and all this!

Hey everyone! I started uploading my novella, Fragments from the Wildlands. It's a high-fantasy novella set in my Five Kingdoms universe. I really had a lot of fun writing it and hopes somebody can get some enjoyment from it...

I find following the general standards of writing and finding ways to do well within them challenging, and I love a good challenge.