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I have seen it a couple times before but one story always seems to burn out before the other and it causes continuity problems for the other.

So if you break it down: all the faith he had(past tense) had(possessive) had(past tense) had(past tense) no effect on the outcome of his life While grammatically correct would be better phrased as: all the faith he used to have, had no effect on the outcome of his life. But I’m not a writer or...

Just go for consistency the MC knows so use female pronouns (unless they are trying not to out the character) if the pov is for character that doesn’t know use the pronouns that they would normally use. (Since they have no way of knowing)