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    Looking for ideas for a cover

    for my second story I already have an idea for what to do I'm more o looking for my first story
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    Looking for ideas for a cover

    Lilly is a trans girl who is given the opportunity of her dreams by her English teacher who offers to use magic to turn her into her daughter and make it as if the world only knew her as a cis girl but after this transformation, a dark coven learns of Lilly's potential and wants to use her for...
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    Looking for ideas for a cover

    Hi all I am looking for some ideas for a cover to my book that would be a good fit to it. Lilly is a trans girl who is given the opportunity of her dreams by her English teacher who offers to use magic to turn her into her daughter and make it as if the world only knew her as a cis girl but...
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    title help

    I reformated the first chapter, see if its any better
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    title help

    Magic is a BIG part of the story I'm just trying to explore better titles for the story because its basically about a trans lesbian witch and a dark coven planing from behind the scenes to use her for their own plans
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    title help

    hi all my name is Chloe and I'm the author of the currently titled Lilly: Story of aa Girl novel however I would like to make it more eye-catching and have more people reading it and im looking for tips on how to do that such as reworking the synopsis or reworking the title into something new...
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    Feedback for Lilly: Story of a Girl

    Honestly, I was coming at it from the standpoint that the MC grew up with the parents and they know the parent's behavior and also later in the story we get some memory/dream sequences that show the parents being bastards. also, I included the bit of the teacher's sister being trans and their...
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    Feedback for Lilly: Story of a Girl

    Besides formating how does it read like is it interesting
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    Feedback for Lilly: Story of a Girl

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/109901/lilly-story-of-a-girl/
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    Feedback for Lilly: Story of a Girl

    Hi all I'm just looking to see what people think about the chapters I have already released of my book I want to be judged solely on the content of the story and will worry about grammar later.
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