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    Can anyone?

    Thank you and sorry for asked review for this half-baked story. I originally wanted to give explanation for everything but that felt like info dump so I cut it down and now I trimmed it too much. Sorry for that I will be careful next time
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    Can anyone?

    Thank you, it's my first time writing story I don't know how to differentiate thoughts of characters and say out loud. Actually : "Phew, the day ended with no problems. Now I can go home, play games, and sleep." This is his thoughts he is not saying out loud I didn't originally planned college...
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    The Future Sight is the title of the story, I don't know how to post a link

    The Future Sight is the title of the story, I don't know how to post a link
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    Can anyone?

    The Future Sight is the title of the story, if anyone give review it will helpful for me to continue
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    Can anyone give review for my story?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1892560/the-future-sight/ This is the link for the story give some feedback it will be helpful to me
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    Can someone read my story and give review ?

    Can someone read my story and give review ?
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