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i'm not going to address any particular post, i'm just going to say I don't agree with labeling first person as some inferior writing...

It's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a...

See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...

That sounds a lot like the second major arc (and only one I've heard most of) in My Werewolf System - except it's his mother and sister...

Sounds... pretty boring TBH... Like OPM would be if there wasn't other stuff happening. The fighting shouldn't even be the focus of this...

Ah, so it's immediately better. Objectively.

It sounds like someone should've been locked up if Zack is constantly killing people in his official fights. A few accidents might be...

And include a link to the fiction page.

I just post between 6:00 AM and 7:00 AM in my local time zone (US East Coast) Mondays and Fridays. Been less than a month, my story has...

Better check which country most of your audience come from dude.

Your best bet is to either pick a time and stick with it, regardless, or to experiment with different times, find one or two that seem...

The smallest thing? Good question. I gained inspiration to write my novel The Shape of Kindness from a minute encounter with a stranger...

Finishing a novel is supposed to bring relief — that’s what people say. You imagine that once you write “The End,” you’ll finally be...

Starting a first novel feels a little like stepping out of your own front door and finding yourself in a landscape you’ve known all your...

They do. Boy's Love and Girl's Love are just genre convention things, not really related to the characters' age at all. E: If you want...