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Might as well. It’s a benefit to being digital.

I believe the thought is that you will probably abandon the work if you have a low chapter count. The higher the number of chapters, the...

If your goal is a print novel, then the delayed character intro might work to your favor. As a webnovel, though, getting the character...

Scene 1 it is. The question is whether an image forms in the reader’s mind. And that is already decided within the first two lines.

No mention of the sound of the wheat rustling in the wind, the dryness of it brushing against her skin?

I was maybe 6? I’d just learned how to write and spell and was thrilled at the idea of telling a story of my very own (just like the...

Mine doesn't even have menus, just a voice that talks to the character (and to the voices talking to other players in the game) and...

After one or two months, when my mind calms down after the hype it felt when wrote those chapters :v But mostly, it is to add filter to...

This. I know I would not pick up your story for that simple reason, I would see the AI synopsis and move away.

You have those stupid "What To Expect/What Not To Expect" bullet points, suggesting that The Butler (AI) was involved somehow - that...

Both versions contain both development and action. As I read them, I observe that the developmental elements are extraneous to the...

Honestly both of them are moving too fast imo without other context if this is literally the first time we see Harry, but I prefer the...

We will lose a lot. Sometimes we lose the people we love. We may not know who we are, or we might feel lost and scattered. We may see...

I'd say this, and you should mull over what I say before coming to a decision: if you have to question if this is SFW, then others will too.

Upload it once you create your story. Don't upload after because admin-bot is too strict; a few large skin-toned patches will result in...