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CCharlesEBrown reacted to L1aei's post in the thread How long do you take to write your novel? with
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This would depend on the me now or the me from over half a decade ago. Right now? Maybe a week if it is a oneshot, maybe a little... -
CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread When Did You Decide to Open a Patreon for Your Story?.Set one up the day before I came to this site, but have never actually used it. Was about 7-12 chapters in all the stories I've posted.
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CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back).Actually, that's a European standard, and using italics for dialogue is another international thing, blanking on which country uses it...
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CCharlesEBrown reacted to Hans.Trondheim's post in the thread I'm a new writer and i wanna feedback with Like.
Hello! I took the time to check out on your work, and I'd like to suggest a few things to improve your story-telling in English. 1)...
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CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It).That is one form of "passive voice" and generally needs to be minimized or avoided in writing.
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CCharlesEBrown reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It) with Like.
No, no. You gave good feedback. These are things I need, so don't feel you offended me because you gave me an honest critique. :blob_cookie:
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CCharlesEBrown reacted to LazyScript's post in the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It) with Like.
Just read your prologue! I'm pretty beginner as a author, so I hope you can accept my humble feedback (*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)ꕤ*.ﾟ First, the...
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CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back).First, learn to spell "imitate." Then learn that imitating an imposter (which is essentially what ChatGPT and all the other AI platforms...
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CCharlesEBrown reacted to Alfir's post in the thread As an author, which character would you want to possess if you transmigrated into your fiction? with Like.
Gotta be Yuen Fu, one of the MC's disciples. Why? He got awesome powers, a harem, and a very broken cheat. However, the downsides were...
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CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread Before I dive into editing, I’d really appreciate any feedback on my story..This is the wrong area regardless - if you're looking for specific advice, you should go to the Tips and Advice area (second one under...
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CCharlesEBrown reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Before I dive into editing, I’d really appreciate any feedback on my story. with Like.
Tell us what you plan on revising. Why do you want to revise it? What are you struggling with? This just feels like a "Read my story"...
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CSorry for the delay in my last chapter. Pc was out. Had to get a whole new motherboard. Last chapter of book one of Isekai: How I Became...
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C12 episodes of spirit bomb.
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CCharlesEBrown replied to the thread Reader Poll — Chapter Format.Well, unless that sentence is: "And then they had an epic fight..." :D But if it's just "For three pages, he stretched out the words...
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CI prefer longer chapters 2.5k+, but the progression of the chapter is important to me too. I don't want to read 2.5k words and then be...