Recent content by CGiverny

Okay so I'm going to be honest here, your story wasn't my cup of tea. I'm really not into fanfic and the story isn't something I'd normally read. But despite my bias, it was an okay story. The only thing that really caught my eye was dialogue. Idk, maybe it's because this is a fanfic, but I was...

Okay first thing that caught my eye was tenses. You seem to go between past and present tense which makes reading a little weird for me. It's probably best to stick to one tense (past tense seems better for this story in my personal opinion). Another thing I noticed is that you do a lot of...

Do you have a ScribbleHub link. I'm only doing books on this platform (should have said that earlier) So plot looked okay. There's a lot you can do with it and it makes for an interesting fantasy world. I guess world-building was fine, although there were some things that didn't seem right to...

I do 5 chapters because by then I'll have a gist about your writing and what your story is like. Okay sure.

Okay so I'm in a critic mood, so I'm opening a thread to do reviews. I'll review the first 5 chapters of your story (one book per person please - but you can post all your books, just know I'll only do one for now and if I enjoy your writing then I'll do your other books.). I'm going to do 10...

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Hi So, I haven't really been active on Scribblehub (life and all), but I have a little time now so I wanted to be a little more active. Anyway, I'm looking for dark sci-fi and fantasy novels to read. Anti-hero, villain type stories. Even if you have sci-fi or fantasy books without the darkness...

If you're still looking for fantasy books, I just started posting it on Scribblehub, but maybe look at my book Forgotten. It's an epic fantasy with lots of world-building (because the two MCs travel through 7 realms of the world). It does have retellings, but they're a sub-plot to the main plot...