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CanOfTuna replied to the thread Do authors want readers to point out spelling/typos in comments?.We get quite blind while writing and reading our own stuff, so new eyes are always appreciated ! -
CanOfTuna reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction? with
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Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said..."... -
There is a popular isekai manhwa/novel that depicts this realistically. You can look up: The Broken Ring: This Marriage Will Fail Anyway
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CanOfTuna reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Switched POV for my Prologue on my WN need feedback with Like.
The third POV has a smoother pacing. As a causal reader, I can still catch the flow of the story more smoothly in the third POV although...
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Well, new readers can come from any chapter. Therefore, character descriptions and context explanations are often repeated in new...
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CanOfTuna replied to the thread Need help picking.Oh, my, gosh. Love the feedback ! Lots of things I haven't even thought about. 1) gonna try this 2) I start with the character name in...
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Honestly, I don't see any significant differences between the 3 versions of this chapter. All chapters have a similar characteristic...
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:blobthumbsup: no worries, the link works as intended now.
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Your docs are set as private.
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CanOfTuna replied to the thread Need help picking.sorry about that, mixed up the links nearly gave you my whole book haha
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Got some feedback on a scene and need to know which version flows better, is the least confusing, and captures the "best" vibe...
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CanOfTuna replied to the thread Tried my hand at some shounen.Italics ! Forgot they existed.
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Not ‘switching’ necessarily, but it does feel jarring to jump from 3rd person limited, ‘He ran upstairs,’ to, ‘Yikes, it’s messy up...
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CanOfTuna reacted to Representing_Tromba's post in the thread What are your favorite, least favorite, and underutilized words? with Like.
A writer always has beef with words.
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CanOfTuna replied to the thread What do you think the next big fad will be?.The next fad will be villainess-centric stories (no bias)