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Okay, I think this approach will be better. Thanks for the suggestion. -
Callarel_04 replied to the thread Is hinting at SA done to child too much?.yeah that's the intended effect of that memory. The world in that story is quite fucked up.
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Callarel_04 reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Is hinting at SA done to child too much? with
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Is hinting at SA done to child too much?.I might be dim, but 'his thighs still hurt' didn't connect me to SA. I would have thought that he was beaten or something if it wasn't...
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Callarel_04 reacted to c37's post in the thread Opinion on horror( or eeriness ) in my work. with Like.
Thank you for reading.
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The "Tip" button still displays properly on non-fanfiction stories, so don't worry! Overall, I think this and the translation removal...
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Fanfics and Monetization.What if I have one original and one fanfic? :blob_hmm:
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Seeking Hardboiled Critique: Does the atmosphere hit hard enough?.By this definition, OP's first chapter isn't even 'softboiled'. Read like the start of a slice of life smut comedy piece.
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Callarel_04 reacted to c37's post in the thread Opinion on horror( or eeriness ) in my work. with Like.
I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared...
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Opinion on horror( or eeriness ) in my work..A nice piece of action with a little thriller, but not scary. Though this might just be me. Imo the 'horror' comes from the unknown and...
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor.I didn't say there isn't any editor here though :blob_hmm: . I said that no editor would write a forum post full of spelling errors...
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Callarel_04 reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor with Haha.
Now, now, how dare you spread these lies? A native British professional editor writes just like that (including the various spelling...
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Callarel_04 reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor with Like.
Sorry, we do have an experienced editor here, she is @LeilaniOtter But maybe you are half right, only a few editors are willing to...
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Callarel_04 reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor with Haha.
No need to even try... it's getting SO OLD, SO FAST...
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Callarel_04 replied to the thread Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor.Read your only other post on this forum. I don't think any 'seasoned editor', or just normal editor, would write like that. Sorry if...