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Just remove 'his thighs still hurt' and replace it with a shudder or a knot in his stomach or smthing. this is fairly mild anyway.

Aren't you very encouraging?

Hmm, I'll consider this.

1. The worst placement is at the start of your opening chapter, especially when done to your MC. 2. Most readers hate endless...

Sprinkle vague hints but don’t be explicit. Keep readers guessing. Introducing a red herring is ideal. Then, during the fight, reveal...

Thank you, this sounds much better than what I initially envisioned. Don't worry, I didn't include it in my published chapter.

so its better to refer to it when he is taking revenge on his abusers (much, much later)? @Eldoria, this is definitely why I asked this...

I want to hear different perspectives before making my own decisions. Also i wanted to know how much is too much.

I feel betraying my world if I completely ignore that topic itself. Or you want me to not include it at all?

Ofc i am not gonna add it to that particular ch, I just used it as an example to show how I would refer to it in future.

You are approved, proceed.

This is definitely not the final version.

If you need to ask... I'll trust the readers and let them decide how I would finish that sentence.

It is illegal to be written like you do with adults. Check out the laws involving that to avoid getting in trouble.

Descriptions of the act itself: no go Mentioning the act has happened and connoted as a crime: yes readers can perfectly fine fill in...