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I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared...

They also represent their personalities, boy is more impulsive and the elf is more controlled.

Must a son answer for the sins of a father he never knew? Aegis was born a cambion in the infernal city of Inanitas — a place where...

ohh my bad, I thought you painted because of your username.

I wanted ask, do you paint? I am struggling with a lot of things as a returner. Can you suggest some tips or playlists to me?

The reason I removed paladin part was because of Aegis being my long-term MC. Right now, I have two MCs with dual pov for every 2-3...

I like your initial synopsis, don’t get me wrong, but you need to center it around Aegis instead of the paladin. Right now, you’ve...

Must a son pay for the sins of a father he never knew? Aegis doesn’t care about sins. He cares about silver. In the infernal city of...

By holes, do you mean just the blanks between paragraphs? fu*k this app i'll just switch to Word.

Rough transition, the character feels like they teleported from the gate to the arena because there is no kinetic movement showing from...

The scene visualization is still rough and blurry. Readers might be confused about where your character is, who they're with, and where...

I don't really want to accuse you of anything, and I think you know that I already helped you, so I have good intentions, but either you...

I write in an app called Scrivener, in it I have to press enter twice to give space between paragraphs. Sometimes I press enter three...

w Tried to fix the pov shifts and re-written few cinematic sections. :blob_cookie: Ninety-four silver, six more, and I won’t be...

Okay, is that the only problem you found? Or do I have to fix something else too? Thanks for replying.