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I don't think you'll take a look again. But I have rewritten chapter 1 with your criticism in mind.

hey don't forget about me.

As someone said, my chapter 1 sucked. It had a soulless MC. My synopsis was also misleading. So, I've revised it and rewritten my...

ouch.

I don't know if this thread is ongoing or not. But can I ask you to roast my work too? It is in my signature. It is better if you just...

yeah no goodie-two-shoes is not what my Mc is going to be

Mine isn't an a-hole, just a thief for now.

Kind of like gray which is created when black and white meet.

So, if I write the proper reasoning and events that led to it. I might make a memorable mc.

Ohh, what's your opinion on selfish mc and villian both with age progression.

understood.

It depends on the character's level of selfishness. If selfishness here is prioritizing oneself and one's loved ones while doing...

Okay, maybe not teenage selfishness. Something like a pragmatic leader or commander.

Thank you :)

its so vivid and has a pop colour... nice.