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    c37 reacted to HungrySheep's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    It feels really weird for me, yeah. Huge paragraphs aren't great to look at either, you're right. I find that the best length is about...
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    c37 reacted to Tempokai's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    Paragraphs are essentially an idea isolated in the text from other ideas. Each new paragraph essentially resets the short term thinking...
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    Is it immersion breaking? Because i am new at this and previously when i started reading i felt huge paragraphs were little tiring.
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    c37 reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl. :blob_teary:
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise* Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you...
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    c37 reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    I never thought of it. Now that you mention it, it does sound like that.
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    c37 reacted to Hans.Edward.Trondheim's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    Glad you like those. Drew those myself, so if you need anything hand-drawn, you can commish me.
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.
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    c37 reacted to MC-Stories's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    Me too https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2019815/beast-heroes-biancas-genisis/...
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence. Damn cover art for your books look amazing.
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    c37 reacted to MC-Stories's post in the thread Critique me. with Love Love.
    I only read the synopsis, but already i'm impressed with the story, the sins of the fathers often cary to the son....
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.
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    c37 replied to the thread Critique me..
    It isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it. You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.
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    c37 reacted to Hans.Edward.Trondheim's post in the thread Critique me. with Like Like.
    Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but... ...just a heads up, the link you...
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