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It feels really weird for me, yeah. Huge paragraphs aren't great to look at either, you're right. I find that the best length is about...
Feb 21, 2026
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Paragraphs are essentially an idea isolated in the text from other ideas. Each new paragraph essentially resets the short term thinking...
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Is it immersion breaking? Because i am new at this and previously when i started reading i felt huge paragraphs were little tiring.
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If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl. :blob_teary:
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Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise* Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you...
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Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?
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I never thought of it. Now that you mention it, it does sound like that.
Feb 21, 2026
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Glad you like those. Drew those myself, so if you need anything hand-drawn, you can commish me.
Feb 21, 2026
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Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.
Feb 21, 2026
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Me too https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2019815/beast-heroes-biancas-genisis/...
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Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence. Damn cover art for your books look amazing.
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I only read the synopsis, but already i'm impressed with the story, the sins of the fathers often cary to the son....
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Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.
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It isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it. You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.
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Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but... ...just a heads up, the link you...
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