I can understand now, where the problems lie. I didn't really think at first that the script-like style was going to be a problem. That's because I wanted it to work as manga script in the future.
I'll rewrite the first chapters if that's the case and will omit the PROLOGUE, because in all...
Thank you very much. I batch uploaded the first 4 chapters 'cause I already had them ready and if someone started reading they would have some story to get into. I am looking forward to your feedback.
NEW WRITER WITH AN ACTION STORY ABOUT PSYCHIC ABILITES
Hi everyone, I'm new to the site and to the writing world. I got the idea to start Vivid Lives in 2021 and released the first two chapters in Wattpad. Due to the lack of an audience and inspiration I dropped it at the time. However, the last...