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    I can understand now, where the problems lie. I didn't really think at first that the script-like style was going to be a problem. That's because I wanted it to work as manga script in the future. I'll rewrite the first chapters if that's the case and will omit the PROLOGUE, because in all...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Thank you very much. I batch uploaded the first 4 chapters 'cause I already had them ready and if someone started reading they would have some story to get into. I am looking forward to your feedback.
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    Free feedback thread.

    NEW WRITER WITH AN ACTION STORY ABOUT PSYCHIC ABILITES Hi everyone, I'm new to the site and to the writing world. I got the idea to start Vivid Lives in 2021 and released the first two chapters in Wattpad. Due to the lack of an audience and inspiration I dropped it at the time. However, the last...
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