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Oh my! ? I didn't mean to pressure you and I'm sorry for causing you stress ? huhu. Honestly, what I love doing is not writing, it is story telling. ? I've been trying different forms/ways of storytelling and one of these forms/ways is writing. I wanted to know what works for me or what are the...

BARELY! HAHA! That was the word I wanted to use that time! I tried hard to recall it but (obviously) I failed and used MERELY instead. ?? Thanks for this! I'm planning to edit my works this weekend soooo the parts that you mentioned are really helpful to meeee. I will omit that word endings...

Thank you for your insightful evaluation. I really really appreciate it. It's my first time writing a book and designing a book cover (plus no friends to give objective review on my work) so your points would totally help me in a long run. Actually, the original title of this book was "The...

Hello ? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/899943-hushed-paradise/chapter/899949/

Thank you for your inputs :) It means so much for me. Regarding the "a" hahahah. It's actually a Filipino endings. I'm having seconds thought if I should just omit it or not but reading your review I think I'm leaning towards removing it :) Thank you again!

hello :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/899943/hushed-paradise/

An intelligent villian. The one who's so reasonable and so good at playing on the gray areas that reader's would start to question there own beliefs. The one who could convince the whole world (i mean the readers) that this world is so worth burning for. The kind of villian that if you were the...

I personally love feedbacks. May it be bad or good. (But not from pure trolls) But getting feedbacks from my readers is not the end for me. Because most of the time reader's feedback is the first layer of their true meaning. If you're really bothered by what they said, ask them why they felt...

Not the writing part but researching. I have love and hate relationship with researching?

I do feel the same a lot of times. I love storytelling since I was a child. I could go on for hours just narrating the interesting movies or things that I watched or witnessed but was constantly told to shut up. :blob_sweat: When I grew up, I found a lot of ways to tell a story too (Singing...

I humbly offer you my not so smutty smut novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/899943-hushed-paradise/chapter/899949/

That person was a little bit weird. Okay. Not just a little, but big weird. The type that would make people raise their brows by how random and out of place this person was in a middle of an always-in-order crowd. That weird.

Hello! Please let me know what you think about it. I really want to know if I'm made to write stories or I'm just wasting my time. ( this statement is without self-pity involve XD ) Many thanks in advanceeeeee. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/899943/hushed-paradise/

Hello! Please roast me until I quit writing. Thank you sooo much! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/899943/hushed-paradise/

Hello! Soooo, this is the case... I don't know where I got this immense confidence (more of blind faith) of mine in terms of writing but deep down I know I lack skills sooooo... Can you give me that one big blow that would made me quit writing with peace of mind? Thank you in advance hehehe. You...