Recent content by Breakin

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    Planning for my story!

    Woah.. how you know I was writing a crime and punishment fan fic?? Only you get my language ? Okay, the first 5 words are right… and the rest are wrong!
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    Planning for my story!

    You guys can share your handwriting. I don’t think mine is bad…
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    Planning for my story!

    Here is my storyline: Hope you guys help me with this! Okay it’s a joke I can’t even read this
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    Feedbacks on my novel!

    Aw you’re so awesome! Yesterday I took all your feedbacks in and rework on my story. If you’re free, you can reread both of the chapters:blob_cookie:
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    Feedbacks on my novel!

    For this, it’s because it’s a very small detail that I dont see the need to expand. But you’re kinda right, I’ll take that into consideration! I used it to keep track of things… maybe I should move it to the glossary instead. Yeah I also felt it was repetitive but I wanted to emphasise that...
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    Feedbacks on my novel!

    Hi guys, any free souls out there can take a look at my novel: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1710263/dotage-and-discretion/ It’s about a man with terminal illness who transmigrated into a high schooler and starting life as a healthy person (along the lines) and meeting his idol. I wanted...
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