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just posted the first two chapters of my book The Dark Assassin Needing any feedback that I can get. Please follow me on my journey!

I have posted a couple of my chapters, and need feedback on my writing. I know I need to work on a lot of things, but any feedback, even negative is appreciated. The Dark Assassin is the current book I am working on, and I would appreciate any tips, tricks, and hints as to improve the first two...