Recent content by Baomont

You're completely right. That's a weakness I absolutely need to work on for sure. I'll make a note to look into that more on my next editing pass through! Thanks for pointing that out!

That's more or less what I'm going for. There are undertones of other plot points that keep things interesting and break up the training a little, but the story follows his journey as a trainee butler, learning the ropes, how to serve, how to improve and achieve the seemingly 'perfection' of his...

I'm working on a book that is quite a new genre for me, but something I have really wanted to delve into. While I am working on a large fantasy world, I didn't want to jump right into writing some epic fantasy novel, instead I wanted to explore stories through the perspectives of ordinary...

I'm new to novel writing. More accustomed to note writing for running D&D campaigns so this is a large step in a new direction for me! I'd love some honest feedback on my writing, even if you're only able to read the first chapter or two. Right now my only feedback is from my wife and she may...