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Using multiple POVs with first-person POV will confuse readers, especially since this is just the prologue. SH readers tend to use... -
I have 435k words and only one review on SH. Got 4 on RR but one was complaining that my MC knew how to cook so... quality of reviews varies
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AVR_Double_Z replied to the thread How do you gain readers for your fiction when you’re new?.Live and keep writing. :blobtaco:
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AVR_Double_Z replied to the thread I started writing as hobby i would appreciate for tips/feedback.Update: 1. New synopsis—still shit though, atleast its not an eyesore... for me. 2. I fixed the confusing chapter variants. 3. Somewhat...
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AVR_Double_Z reacted to Sola-sama's post in the thread Writing Prompt What if hitler was reincarnated? with
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Maybe this is just me, but why not reincarnate him/her into the very empire that opressed the demi humans? He already has an... -
AVR_Double_Z replied to the thread I started writing as hobby i would appreciate for tips/feedback.thanks
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AVR_Double_Z posted the thread I started writing as hobby i would appreciate for tips/feedback in Story Feedback.this technically my second series but the first one is bit overboard and gore so i deleted it as of now this is what im writing...