The original one:
Daniel scrolled to the final panel of the web comic as the bus rattled along the evening road.
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The hero stood drenched in blood, his sword trembling in his weakened grip. His fallen companions lay scattered behind him like broken shields.
Across the shattered...
The more I write, the better my writing seems to get.
And the more I get the itch to rewrite my previous chapters because they now seem worse to me than when I had written them.
Isn't this an endless cycle? I can't figure out what to do.
I feel the same. I, too, draw using a pencil, and digital drawing feels too awkward for me.
I have tried drawing on iPad using a stylus and without it. I have tried drawing on PC (using a mouse) and laptop (Using the touchpad).
The biggest issue I feel is that there is no friction, which makes...
You dare speak against THIS ONE?! Such Blasphemy!!! You must be a cultist who worships creatures of the dark.
This one is the most glorious and most supreme god in existence.
This one is Chunnibyou God of Supremacy, the only god worshipped in Scribble Village.
The villagers praise this one! The villagers worship this one! The villagers bow before THIS ONE!!!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2239749/regnum-aetern-dual-rebirth/
So this here is my story, and I feel like I'm doing something wrong or something strange. But I just don't know what! And it's killing me.
So I thought I would ask for feedback since I have posted enough chapters. I...