Recent content by ASpringNight

Well Damon really didn’t want her. Less so since Selina kind of trapped him in a marriage he didn't want. He is angry and acts nasty at first but in his defence who wouldn’t??? But he is an honest person and good man at the core. Selfish too... Damon is the youngest son of a very wealthy man...

Honestly, I wasn’t exactly sure how to respond to this comment either. I didn’t see my story as a sadomasochist romance so... It's more about Selina’s choices and the lies she tell, the secrets she keeps to protect her baby and herself. She builds a family out of the ashes of the love she lost...

Thank you Thank you for your feedback. ? To be honest I was awere that something was making the story slow paced but I couldn't put my finger on it. I can see it now. I guess I did make reputations without noticing. I write and rewrite over and over. After a while every centence blends in...

Hello everyone! I’m a first-time writer and I’m looking for some feedback on my story: Stolen Promises, Cost of Forever — a character-driven romantic drama about betrayal, survival, secrets and unexpected love. As someone writing for the first time, and in a second language, I want to learn...