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That's fair since the character is supposed to be a villian it wouldn't really make sense if they start farming midway since the premise here is the fact that he's a villian. If he's a madman I can see him turning from a genocidal villian and then to farming because you couldn't really grasp...

Hmmm what If the mc is crazy tho does it still count? I mean crazy person moral compass tend to be..ever changing at times but then again never really seen a crazy character with ever changing moral compass being done perfectly.

I take it back ? idk why but that's like disturbing it's like being judged like an animal?...which I think most people don't take kindly into...

That's a bit interesting so basically it's for views at the end of the day huh wonder when I will see a realistic one where mc doesn't succumb to this supposed teenage hormones. Freudian psychology sounds interesting tho hopefully it doesn't jumble people brain like how Nietzsche often does...

Ah so basically you're just into milf...

Ah so there's that I didn't really check that one only the genre and what's underneath it. I mean if you're a grown adult (mentally) it shouldn't be that hard to control yourself but instead they tend to succumb to it willingly. It kinda reminds me to rudeus a bit...

I mean the story I'm reading isn't smut except mature and harem so I definitely wasn't expecting...some quickie scene?. Well I'll be dammed I thought teenage hormones was a myth so I guess it's very real never experienced it in my teenage years so I thought it's fake. I mean your story kinda...

Is teenage hormones really a thing? Because I keep seeing these mc which is mentally grown but got thrusted into an adolescent body of some fanfic character. And one thing I noticed is the fact that this teenage hormones thingy and it always gotta be sexual...first it's just staring at the maid...

At least you have a tad bit of self conscience and not that much of a degenerate. You're welcome tho.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1164955/the-black-queen-of-brockton-bay/ Yeah it's futa yeah it's kinda ntr I have no idea what's with the author maybe they secretly want to be a double phallic of a head creature? Who knows but my genuine reaction to finding this especially on top 50 was ...

I mean I get where you're coming from but it is what it is. there's lots more disturbing stuff here honestly so anal is kind of a light work per say? We literally have a futa xenomorph queen,dude who can modify his freaking sperm heck I ain't even SUPRISED if someone make an original story about...

I mean I have read tons of novel...like a lot perhaps more than a thousand at this point? Of course I only finished a few but I still couldn't catch or even imitate their writings I wonder why is it because each authors have their own differing writing style and that I'll have to find my own...

Alright guys thanks for the reply I'll try first if it turns out horrendous then horrendous it is after all I'm still new.

Then how do you think I should go with it? I can't really post a rough draft cause honestly it's horrendous.

Not sure if I can be counted as one I tend to at times. Create a bunch of chapter draft and then reread it and goes. "Which retard wrote this?" And then I realized it was me, deleted the whole sh*t ? and repeat. Like I couldn't help but cringe at it the grammars and all...