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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    Second chapter is out, hope to see you guys there!
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    Dante's character is more like a child, he hasn't seen the world since he has been locked up his whole life, there are some physical barriers for him to communicate with others, but whether the character becomes evil,good or even an anti-hero depends on the decisions people make. PS: the first...
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    lets hope it does:blob_teary:
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    Hello everyone my name is Aphell, and I have my eyes on a project I wanted to start, and Have started today, this is an interactive story where The readers will chose from a few selection of choices and vote for how the story should progress. I Don't know if its even alright to be posting in...
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    I have posted this, and have posited on authors general, I'm skeptical if Its alright to make a thread on the readers forum as well. but I am trying to make this work, even If I get a few response that would push the story forward, and in a few days it might reach at least 100 views, and hey for...
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    don’t usually do this, but since this is an interactive story, I kind of have to. The idea’s simple: you read the chapter, then vote on what happens next by replying to my comment at the end of the chapter. Each vote directly shapes the direction of the plot—think of it like a chaotic...
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    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    I don’t usually do this, but since this is an interactive story, I kind of have to. The idea’s simple: you read the chapter, then vote on what happens next by replying to my comment at the end of the chapter. Each vote directly shapes the direction of the plot—think of it like a chaotic...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    gotcha, good luck.
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    does this mean the others are going to be forgoten forever?:blob_shock: if not I can wait:sweating_profusely:
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    Hello, How is my alternative story so much better?

    Hey I've started my writing with Ar'cen but then I made a 100 readers special chapter but then I couldn't stop my self from keep on going. and so I decided to make it its own fiction Ar'cen : demon in reception, And It feels a lot better than My original one, I cant really understand, I don't...
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    Yet another fool asking for reviews :D

    Hey every one, I have recently rewritten my story, and I would honestly appreciate it if you could tell me your thoughts, much appreciated and the shortest introduction I can think of is Everyone thinks she’s just a child. But her She eyes see it—the flicker in her stare. The part of her that...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hello, I just recently found out even scribble hub has forum, and place for this kind of stuff, but if you are up for reviewing honestly I would be gratefull if you could give mine a look. Be honest please
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