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    Feedback is needed? harsh critic is what I need now

    You make it sounds worse? The problem is... a world that is built based on no talk no sound has bigger impact since 'word' itself lose meaning there. They use images they know ...and symbolic images if no image could describe the intention. So to describe a train from someone's point of view who...
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    Feedback is needed? harsh critic is what I need now

    That's true tho, I used LLM heavily for editing and grammar checking the text and ended up like that, but I can swear that I wrote it... but then it 'suggest' me better wording then (I admit I use then alot) I kinda 'that's make sense'? and edit it. (leave out the cover please, I just generate...
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    Feedback is needed? harsh critic is what I need now

    I'm sorry? I am guilty publishing this story here...:sweating_profusely:
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    Feedback is needed? harsh critic is what I need now

    Hey, so I just started a new series with a really unique style of narration. It has very little dialogue, since most of the conversations happen through mental images. At first, it felt doable—like, Hey, I think I can pull this off! (It was totally on a whim) But now it’s getting harder… like...
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