Recent content by anthony59237

How is that phrased extremely poorly? She spoke calmly but was panicking on the inside. That's all. Don't get how your variant is any better? How is it broken english? It reads pretty clearly to me... She thought her mom was invincible. Rewrite the whole thing? Because one sentence used...

I'm just gonna ignore the first one, lol. And, since when does coexist=peace? That would be a utopia, haha. What's her other half? You'll find out once you destroy my first chapter, I reckon... Thanks for complimenting the synopsis!

Hello, you reviewed my first chapter a while back and absolutely destroyed me! I revised it a lot since then. I'd like to know your thoughts on it now. You can leave feedback in the thread. Thanks a lot! Link below: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/628112/the-fam-dark-comedyurban-fantasy/

Hey, thanks so much for the offer. Link below to my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/628112/the-fam-dark-comedyurban-fantasy/

Ay, thanks so much for your kind gesture. Please let me know your thoughts. 8k words is around chapter 5. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/628112/the-fam-dark-comedyurban-fantasy/

Please let me know what you think of mine. You can just leave the feedback in thread. Thanks a lot for what you do! Link below: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/628112/the-fam-dark-comedyurban-fantasy/

Hello. Very new writer here and just started releasing my first work. If you have the time, could you please dm me your feedback? Thank you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/628112/the-fam/