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    Need advice for my new chapter

    I'm working on it, i am trying to improve all the chapter before posting new chapter ?
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    Need advice for my new chapter

    You are my savior, thanks! English is not my native language, so I really needed that advice This was absolutely perfect! Exactly what I needed to improve my writing. More description, variation and MUSCLES! Some of the errors are because of the translator l, other because of my inexperience...
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    Open for commission

    Hi, I'm a new author, but surprise! I am also an artist, if you want some work at a good price, you can ask me. $15 head $20 half body $25 fullbody 30$ Background is fullbody For more complicated commissions the price will not exceed $45. Here are some examples:
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    Need advice for my new chapter

    Hi, I just published my new chapter, and I would like some constructive critique. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/712379-unlocked/chapter/718689/
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    Feedback for new chapter!

    Hi, I just published my new chapter, and I would like some constructive critique. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/712379-unlocked/chapter/718689/
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    I need feedbeck for my story!

    So if I want to make a new thread I just ignore the other and make a new one?
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    Feedback for chapter!

    Can someone give me some feedback, before I post the next chapter? Unlocked - Strange dream | Scribble Hub www.scribblehub.com
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    I need feedbeck for my story!

    Sorry to disturb you, but do you know I to delete a thread?
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    Need Feedback for new chapter!

    I just posted my new chapter, can someone give me some feedback and corrections? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/712379-unlocked/chapter/715449/
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    Can someone give me some tips on this chapter?

    I just published a new chapter and I would like some revisions and tips. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/712379-unlocked/chapter/715449/ Ps: How do you delete a hold threads?
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    Need opinion for my second chapter

    Thank you so much! you really give me some important advice. Like you I'm not a English native so nor a expert author, so your word are really important
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    Need opinion for my second chapter

    Chapter one need a lot of modifications, do you find anything else strange?
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    Need opinion for my second chapter

    I need an opinion before publishing my third chapter, can someone read it and give me some warning or advice? Thanks in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/712379/unlocked/
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    I need feedbeck for my story!

    Thanks you!
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