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    Starting a rewrite soon so looking for feedback on my episodic space opera story

    Thanks, I tend to do that…info overload. I will try to smooth it out on the rewrite
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    This is a story I wanted to continue but couldn’t find the motivation. I think it is too generic. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/627628-a-soldiers-life/chapter/627630/
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    Starting a rewrite soon so looking for feedback on my episodic space opera story

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/605537/starship-engineer/ hi all. i am trying to improve some plot aspects of my fast paced space opera story. it had no dialogue, the chapters are 2000 words, and it starts getting fun around chapter 6. i am going into a grammar edit soon (just picked up...
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