hey! so I have been writing a novel "My Infinite Mana System" on here and I desperately need some really honest feedback about it.... thanks in advance.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1483002/my-infinite-mana-system/
So I have read my novel few times and still I am not really sure if it hooking or boring. I would like to know your feedback on it, Thank you
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1311551/lord-of-the-perished/