Recent content by Ahrihn

hello people! I'm currently writing another novel and wanted some feed back for my first chapter. Please be as brutal as you lot need, I can take it. I appreciate any and all efforts! The first chapter: Please be as brutal as you all need, i love honest and sharp feedback. Ideally, please...

Thank you so much for your feedback, it was really helpful! Also, regarding the use of the word 'emperor' — in Chinese (and most other asian languages, e.g., Korean and Japanese), emperors aren't actually exclusively male. It's just that all but one are. The role between empress and emperor is...

:ROFLMAO: Yep, I pre-wrote the whole thing then dumped it on the site in under a week. Bad for the algorithm?

Yippee!! I hope you enjoy!

Roast me please! Go wild i want to CRY and fix this mess https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1553832/the-shadow-guard-and-her-princess/

Hi! i would love some developmental critque, I'd love to know what I'm doing wrong :blob_teary: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1553832/the-shadow-guard-and-her-princess/

ooo! Feedback please, it would be greatly appreciated! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1553832/the-shadow-guard-and-her-princess/

thank you!

Unfortunately, I'm hoping to seek a literary agent, which means that for legal reasons I can't publish the novel on this site. Again, I've (*****) to all the important chapters, I'm by no means expecting people to read 84k haha

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I'm currently writing a YA novel but i'm not sure which genre/s it would fit into. Any help here is appreciated! My novel has: Romance (for context, while the romance isn't the key point of the story, it is one of the main reasons for the MC's development and essential for the climax &...

Hello! I'm soon to apply for a writing competition, and I'd like some feedback on my short story prior to submission. However, due to some publishing rules, I cannot place the draft directly onto ScribbleHub — I will have to privately share it via GoogleDocs. After getting feedback, I will...

Hello hello. I'm currently writing a Xianxia, and I'm wondering if the following curse words would break immersion in a traditional historical chinese setting: Fuck Shit Bullshit Idiot Twat For now, I've left all of them but changed 'fuck' to the untranslated ‘他妈的’ . Do you guys think having...

Hey! So I've been writing something and I've gotten stuck. Basically, I got my MC and her team (MC and ML are gods, plus two ghosts and a human) that need to investigate a goddess to prove that she's been kidnapping mortals and dumping them in a mountain range (where they were then killed by one...

I'm writing a scene where the MC self-harms, one part of which involving her scratching out/tearing the back of her hands. Would this bleed a lot? Like to the extent of dripping blood? Also can a gas lighter (like a long tube ones) cause significant, obvious burns? Are those ones painful? Do ppl...