Recent content by AdrianCassius

I would like you to review chapter 19 of my story. You won't really understand the story, but since you seem to mostly focus on style and grammar, it doesn't matter that much. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/530193-the-ruins/chapter/626584/

Here's my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/530193/the-ruins/ Please, give me feedback in PM.